follow your heart

Hello, I am 16 years old, I don't know much about photography but I have been learning for 6 months. I hope I can write a nice critique, and can help you! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
So let's start it.. This picture is really colorful and the bokeh is really smooth, and this emphasis the beatiful model! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/> I really like these colors, it gives the picture an autumn feeling. Every pictures tells something. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
But there is a little problem that I don't like, the shadow on her face and on her shoulder, I would have moved it a little bit so the shadow does not appear on her face.
I see the sun gives a fantastic smooth light, did you make this picture in the afternoon? <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
Thats all, I hope I helped you, and keep it up! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>