I love this photograph because of the pose and the soft colours in contrast with her dark hair. She looks really relaxed, yet oh so tense. There is some emotion involved.
Your capture is also really good and I love how you played with the focus in this.
But since there's always a 'but' in writing critiques, I should point out that I dislike your background. As to where the subject of your photograph is placed nicely, the lines of the wall and window in the back are not straight at all ànd they are very prominent in this image.
I don't know whether another angle could have solved this without touching the picture's integrity, but I'm guessing that if there was, this one wouldn't be on your dA. I don't know how good you are with photoshop (I know I fail at it), but perhaps you could try editing it out sometime, just to see what it looks like.
She looks really relaxed, yet oh so tense. There is some emotion involved.
Your capture is also really good and I love how you played with the focus in this.
But since there's always a 'but' in writing critiques, I should point out that I dislike your background. As to where the subject of your photograph is placed nicely, the lines of the wall and window in the back are not straight at all ànd they are very prominent in this image.
I don't know whether another angle could have solved this without touching the picture's integrity, but I'm guessing that if there was, this one wouldn't be on your dA.
I don't know how good you are with photoshop (I know I fail at it), but perhaps you could try editing it out sometime, just to see what it looks like.
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