since I'm not a premium member I shall write my thoughts in a comment:
I like the composition, deliberately slicing the top of the head is something that I often do and consider an interesting way to stimulate the imagination. The facial expression is plain perfect as well as the warm-cold color combination of the subject-background. What I dislike is the placement of the hand and the obtrusive whiteish glove thing over it. Try to crop out the lover part of the photo by as far as the top of the finger to get anamorphic film format and see where it goes from there
Apart from the hand I think this is your best photo from this shoot and only comment here.