I am liking what I see here for the most but I will suggest that you tone down the whiteness of this picture. Looking at it for brief moments it appears to be rather overtly done so that is just something to consider in regards to the lighting of this photo. One thing that I will say certainly grabbed my attention was that little elegant hair clip she's wearing. I like this and I also think it ultimately enhanced the brillance of the photo because it kind of exhibits that traditional very lady like type look. It's attractive to me anyway; the pose is nice but I think if her expression was a delicate as what she's wearing it would have been even more lovely.
wow i love her expression!! this photo has something special and fascinating about it but i'm not sure what it is yet O.o but i think it's the light because it seems to cover her... i really like it! congrats to such an awesome shot