I would have to say the posing and lighting in the photo is amazing. Composite is nice and the model is gorgeous. The photo is flawless, there is nothing that should be changed or improved on. I hope to see more work from you.
I love the idea of this photo....Much prefer your photo of cindy. Not because of their differentiation on beauty. That would be shallow of myself to say but it's because in this photo. The light, though I get your point in using it...is 'too much'. Also in terms of her facial expression, was their ever a moment you felt you would need to say, 'this is you, but does it haft to be so much' because Jess's eyes are almost....I dunno. Hard to put my finger on that but they distract me. Like the usage of the teeth, almost says 'passionate about the surroundings' Where as with Cindy, the light was there. It was noticeable and something to some extent you could appreciate. This was me being extra critical because from the rest of your work, your very talented and in that see a lot of promise. Your work is brilliant as a whole I can imagine hearing your name a lot through photographic magazines ^_^