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they tell me that you're mine by SabrinaCichy they tell me that you're mine by SabrinaCichy
Model: Jessi :heart:
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All right, my first critique in a while and I think I'll start by just giving you my thoughts. I assume you've edited this slightly to bring down her skin tone, and make the red stand out. I feel like you're losing your models hair, perhaps if you made a selection of it and brought the colour out a bit more around the edge? But otherwise the colour works. I do think you're starting to lose your model into the background, and maybe this is what you're going for? The focus is tack sharp on the rose, with a slight bokeh by the time you get to her face, and it looks great. I find that I would prefer the negative space in the photo to be in the direction that she is facing, rather than behind her. This would give more of the illusion that she was looking in the direction of something out of frame. So to sum up, great focus, good comp (would change for personal preference :P), colours work very well and I like the desaturation. :D Great shot.
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A high impact photo. I love the light glares and brightness surrounding the subject, it really makes everything pop for sure. Speaking on the topic of brightness though, I believe that it almost washes out the subject a tad bit from behind. This creates an illusion that she is flat. I don't know if it was your editing job, or your light source, but this didn't seem natural to me.

I really enjoyed the fact that the rose is almost perfectly centered and is in full focus whereas the girl is kind of backing it. Unique technical touch, well done.

I also liked the colour palette you chose and STUCK WITH. It is very important that you stick with certain colours, be they neutral and/or another colour. In this piece you have displayed this well, making it glow naturally and organically without being too busy.

Keep up the beautiful work.
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chabi-asseles Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
lovely
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Eve-Francesca Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The red in this is amazing. =D
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello, you have been re-featured in my Weekly Feature Article.
Here is the complete Feature and News Article List, you might find other works of yours in there.
Have a nice day :huggle:
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Larettes Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Student Interface Designer
Featured here :heart: : [link]
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Diamond-Piece Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Hobbyist
nice shot..
love it :heart:
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njomany Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012
Is this taken with f/1.2 L lens or the standard f/1.4 one?
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:iconalice0694:
alice0694 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012
Perfection.
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graphickercan Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012
spectacular...
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:iconravenlael:
ravenlael Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Student General Artist
the lighting looks nice... :)
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:iconlost-in-the-attic:
lost-in-the-attic Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012
those are amazing
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mysticism Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love the color in this one! And your smile is absolutely gorgeous :)
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello, you have been featured on my front page in my weekly Box Feature.
For more details about how this feature works feel free to check the "About Features" section in my journal.
Have a nice day :huggle:
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PeaceGrrl Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
What a beautiful caption!! Love the feeling of this photo!!
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FrankAndCarySTOCK Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012
Very lovely photo.
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:iconinnerfight32:
InnerFight32 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012
Absolutely gorgous!!
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:iconhitsugayaislove:
hitsugayaislove Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love the contrast of the red colour with the exposure.
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:iconcenixnova:
CenixNova Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:clap: :rose:
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:iconcalamityjey:
CalamityJey Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
the model is very expressive! O.O good work!
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Lightning-Powered Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Professional General Artist
What a lovely portrait! and THAT SMILE
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:iconyavorchanov:
YavorChanov Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012
I will always admire your work!
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:iconxxxchannyxxx:
xxxchannyxxx Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012
very beautiful :)
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:iconkatethebest:
katethebest Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Student Photographer
Amazing!
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dawidmitoraj Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Professional Photographer
Wow, very nice
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punnga1 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012
3rd generation sex [link]
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stayintwisted Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
the rose is pretty too :)
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:iconpersonsreality:
PersonsReality Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Student General Artist
it's so beautiful! I love it.
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g-a-m Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012
:thumbsup:
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Tokka98 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012
V-day Rox I will Give My GirLfreind something Special <3
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xxxChemicalAngelxxx Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012
So lovely for V-Day
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adriapaladin Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012
How did you do the rose? Is it digitally edited? It looks like it has too many petals to be real. I love it, in any case!
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SabrinaCichy Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Professional Photographer
no it's real :) bought it in a store in my town
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:iconadriapaladin:
adriapaladin Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012
Whoa, cool!
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:iconjemms2012:
jemms2012 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
She is so gorgeous <3
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LabGirl32299 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Student General Artist
i absolutely love the picture.
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PhotoshopIsMyKung-Fu Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
♥♥♥♥
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:iconlolitsjae:
lolitsjae Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
another amazing shot >< :heart:
keep up the great work please!
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DianaGrigore Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012
lovely sharpness and lighting. :thumbsup:
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:iconzizz01010101:
Zizz01010101 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome valentine pic!
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Jacob8319 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
greate work
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:icondeviousdots:
DeviousDots Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful!!! Love the deep red color :D
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:iconarmidaus:
armidaus Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012
Photo speaks so much you don't even need a title, just having the rose held up to her chest says a whole lot without. Very few photos like these that exist, where they speak an unfathomable amount of words. Overall great job. (:
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MrsMelie Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012
wow *_*
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:iconkoshain:
Koshain Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Gets me all in the mood for Valentines day
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danceydancetime Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's you again! Of course this is amazing.

Well, I think this is as good as reason to +Watch you now!
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Dxt85 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012
Amazing work!
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AlexandraBaban Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Professional Photographer
I am a little bothered about the fact that her mouth is not in focus, but other than that it is a gorgeous piece! Lovely!
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PureLightHealer Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012
Gorgeous
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butterfly-so Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012
Beautiful
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:iconcorruptedjester:
CorruptedJester Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Student General Artist
This is a beautiful photo. May I use the rose?
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Mister-0 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
The reds really stands out and she has a beautiful smile :)
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